I just read that...
and uhh...
cough cough.
Yeah I really dont even know what to say without using the word fuck, cunt and polar bear.
so..ill just keep my comment about that poem to myself.

hey if you want some good poetry check out these two kids

[link]

and

[link]

they are some talented people, hope you like their work.

DA is an odd place....sometimes I wonder how all the great amazing artist are over looked and all the secular, boring, "popular" ones are just gods on here...
good luck on finding some good writers
I know how difficult it is to do.

take care
-Gretchen

thanks a lot. i'm glad you agree. i'm the same way with dA.. sometimes i really love it, especially when i find good photography (which is often), but other times i'm thoroughly disgusted at the level of writing some people seem to actually LIKE. of course, the people who DO get featured are people who have some type of connection to an authority figure here, so they just get more and more popular and people like me just sit here.

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the prospect of his future life stretched before him like
a sentence; not a prison sentence, but a long-winded
sentence with a lot of unnecessary subordinate clauses

ahhhhhhhh!!!

wtf, mate.

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"keep me up till five only because all your stars are out, and for no other reason."

oh my god.
it's shit.

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saint crocodile just needs to go sailing.

that poem sucks, and you deserve the recognition SO much more than they do!
this place is just confusing sometimes..

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DymADozen

~un-invisible -A club that cares!
Enigma

i know. i know.

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the prospect of his future life stretched before him like
a sentence; not a prison sentence, but a long-winded
sentence with a lot of unnecessary subordinate clauses

lol, exactly. i'm glad you see it too.

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the prospect of his future life stretched before him like
a sentence; not a prison sentence, but a long-winded
sentence with a lot of unnecessary subordinate clauses

yeah it really is. thanks.

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the prospect of his future life stretched before him like
a sentence; not a prison sentence, but a long-winded
sentence with a lot of unnecessary subordinate clauses

it's so good. omgz.

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al gore: wanna borrow my mace for the walk home?
me: no thanks. i have a glock.